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-First sentence: the word "recognizable" would work better than "distinguishable"
-You're repeating the word "smile" too often
-" “Me neither… Only when I have to…” he offered as he lifted a hand to his own necklace and examined it carefully. “That was four years ago…” "
There's no need to use ellipses. Just make them periods. Also, "he offered"; wrong word choice, I think. He's not offering anything before or during his dialogue. Finally, the pendant was under his shirt, so he'd have to pull it out before he could examine it.
-"I was assaulted with memories…" Assaulted has a negative connotation, the pendant is a symbol of strength and protection, as well as the implied meanings of trust and friendship. Unless you had a specific reason for using that word, I suggest choosing a nicer one.
-I'm not convinced that your use if italics is warranted. I know that it's not necessary, since you can just change the verb tense instead, but I'm not sure if it's actually considered wrong or not.
-"It was the best gift I'd ever gotten"
Gotten = received.

Your grasp of the language is very good, and I think you have the beginnings of a good story here. Most of the things I corrected above were very small issues, mostly related to grammar and diction. I have nothing bad to say about your style (with the possible exception of the italics. I still see no reason for them to be there), flow, or creativity. So overall I think I'd give this a 7.5/10, or in other words it's pretty good for a young writer. Keep going with this, and don't let people's corrections/crits get you down. When people tell you that something was done wrong, or that it could be done in a better way, it's not a personal insult, just a suggestion to help you learn and grow. And grow you will, so long as you keep practicing.